Here is the much edited version of my previous entry. I think it's gotten a bunch better. Please let me know what you think--even if it's "This kind-of sucks Emily" I won't be offended.

It’s Always Cloudy Downtown.

It’s taken me forty-five minutes to reach the Library El stop and I still haven't flipped a page in my book. Seventeen stops ( Read more... )

It’s Always Cloudy Downtown.

It’s taken me forty-five minutes to reach the stop on the el. Though I have the book on redwoods you lent me, the trip seems to be taking hours. Anxiety has been creeping through my blood like hemlock since you called over an hour ago. In moments I will see your face. I assume I’m not prepared. I should have ( Read more... )